Realizing that everything was fake,
I'm concerned about us two,
Suddenly, our magic seemed a mistake,
and you didn't even noticed too.
Understanding this new abysm,
which stands between us,
For me, its existence, is even painful to realize,
but you seem to be blind.
I gave to you my being, as I swore I would,
as all real friends do,
but I'm forced to this destiny,
of loosing you.
Like a déjà vu,
I see these repeated scenes,
chasing me, they don’t let me go,
but I know the ending of this story,
and it is me as the fool.
I trusted again on having someone like you,
beside me, as I thought you would,
Is that the mistake?
'cause I want to believe that what I'm searching for, exists.
Or I'm laying on an pointless dream?
I'm only sure about something,
and it is that I’m realizing things I should have seen before.
I'm concerned about us two,
Suddenly, our magic seemed a mistake,
and you didn't even noticed too.
Understanding this new abysm,
which stands between us,
For me, its existence, is even painful to realize,
but you seem to be blind.
I gave to you my being, as I swore I would,
as all real friends do,
but I'm forced to this destiny,
of loosing you.
Like a déjà vu,
I see these repeated scenes,
chasing me, they don’t let me go,
but I know the ending of this story,
and it is me as the fool.
I trusted again on having someone like you,
beside me, as I thought you would,
Is that the mistake?
'cause I want to believe that what I'm searching for, exists.
Or I'm laying on an pointless dream?
I'm only sure about something,
and it is that I’m realizing things I should have seen before.
de donde lo sacaste?
ResponderEliminarLo escribí yo
ResponderEliminarHola, pasé para ver si habías actualizado, pero no, colgaste, asi que, no, nada, todo bien igual (?).
ResponderEliminarEl poema este es genial.
Genial.
Porque, sinceramente, no es la gran cosa el principio. Es decir, sí, está bueno, pero no da muchas vueltas ni nada especial. Pero el final es lo que está bueno. Como que te pega, choca, y "ja" y sonreís un poco. Y el "before" rojo y grande está bueno, como que te deja la palabra sonando.
Igual es medio confuso. No se sí habla de una relación en serio, o de dos amigos, o de una relación que medio que no sabés, o nada, no se. O mi lectura es que se trata de dos amigos que sí, no se, se copan y medio que se terminan medio gustando, o no, pero un poco hay, y después como que ven todo desde afuera, y, no se, chocan. Igual es una interpretación re retorcida. Soy malísimo, debería leer más poesía.
Pero igual está bueno. Muy bueno. Subí más cosas, chau.